We are learning how to revise work in a step by step way.
I will provide evidence that I have made revisions by:
-using sticky notes or margin notes to indicate the changes I have made.
-replacing, adding, and/or deleting 15-20 Outlaw Words (or other weak words).
-using my organizer to guide the writing of proper paragraphs.
-confirming spelling, capitals, and proper punctuation.
NEW, ROUND 2:
-making changes to my opening sentence to make it engaging and interesting to my audience (grade 7)
-thinking about, commenting upon, and, if necessary, changing the order of my paragraphs so that my most convincing argument is my last point and my weakest argument is my middle point (grade 8)